Screencastify of me reading my work
Hello blog world
I have been learning to describe an object an we had to describe a orange. I think i didn't write enough please can you give me some feedback, and here is my link to my screencastify of me reading my work .
Thank you for listening and reading my work.
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ReplyDeleteKia Ora Fehi,
ReplyDeleteI like your writing because it was awesome and all of it was cool and it made sentence next time you could put more sentence.
From Raymond
Kia ora Fehi,
ReplyDeleteNice work Fehi I really really liked your screencastify because I liked how you described the fruit. Your work was really impressive.